tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8846083269979480726.post6996570790728785406..comments2023-10-26T05:12:54.595-07:00Comments on The WORLD is FUBAR and So Am I: Nemesispavan madhinihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13620329149018818743noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8846083269979480726.post-33486085375697670252009-04-20T23:22:00.000-07:002009-04-20T23:22:00.000-07:00@ Aditi ... thanks!
@ Mrunal ... thanks !! yeah, ...@ Aditi ... thanks!<br /><br />@ Mrunal ... thanks !! yeah, short, abrupt kinda words seem to be my style ... sorta noticeable right from the start na ... <br /><br />Somehow I feel "I am afraid" suits the metre of the poem better (frankly, can't think of anything better to put in it's place, and completely removing it doesn't sound nice) ...Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456924933255987829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8846083269979480726.post-63131986754840896222009-04-20T22:36:00.000-07:002009-04-20T22:36:00.000-07:00chuck 'i am afraid' from the last line... will sou...chuck 'i am afraid' from the last line... will sound better!<br /><br />like the short abrupt kinda words... they convey the frantic search for peace very beautifully....Mrunalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13811693558036142004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8846083269979480726.post-62157902469920354342009-04-19T13:18:00.000-07:002009-04-19T13:18:00.000-07:00Well...i basically dont have words to describe the...Well...i basically dont have words to describe the beauty of this poem...embellished with wonderful words...!! <br />Keep it up pal..!!<br />Hats off...!!<br />:)Aditiness rockz!https://www.blogger.com/profile/07698041864635135406noreply@blogger.com