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Sunday, April 19, 2009

Nemesis

Shadows of the mind,
in rays of light,dancing.
Myriad designs,
beyond understanding.

Hollow souls all around,
echoing within.
Contemplation fails.
with emotion ruling.

Disturbance,
and confusion.
I wander,
a pathless notion.

A song-bird,called clarity,
calls, now, and then.
Adding further,to the
perennial polarity.

A multitude of feelings,
varied as we are,
come and go.
The solitary peace,
continues to elude.

Peace, oh peace.
Ever-lasting peace,
I am afraid,shall remain forever,
my nemesis.

4 comments:

Aditiness rockz! said...

Well...i basically dont have words to describe the beauty of this poem...embellished with wonderful words...!!
Keep it up pal..!!
Hats off...!!
:)

Mrunal said...

chuck 'i am afraid' from the last line... will sound better!

like the short abrupt kinda words... they convey the frantic search for peace very beautifully....

Fubar.Avenger said...

@ Aditi ... thanks!

@ Mrunal ... thanks !! yeah, short, abrupt kinda words seem to be my style ... sorta noticeable right from the start na ...

Somehow I feel "I am afraid" suits the metre of the poem better (frankly, can't think of anything better to put in it's place, and completely removing it doesn't sound nice) ...

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